Which of these two descriptions of experience
is more effective? List the differences that make one of the
descriptions more effective than the other.
`I was Secretary of
the Music Society from 1994 to `95. During this time I
realized that the Society's reserve funds needed to be
increased. Many new members were recruited and a number
of successful concerts were held. In this way enough
money was raised to cover all our general expenses up to
1997. I also re-arranged the committee so that all
members knew what their duties were supposed to be.'
Secretary of Music
Society 1994-'95: Increased Society's funds from
$20,000 to $150,000. Directed recruitment drive,
increasing membership from 102 to 345 in six months.
Streamlined committee, establishing clear duties for
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